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Nobody Cares About Your Features. Here's How to Write Ad Copy That Sells.

Inside this article, you’ll discover:

  • The brutal truth about why your current ad copy is being ignored.
  • 4 battle-tested frameworks (PASA, BAB, FBA, AIDA) that force you to write copy that converts.
  • No-BS examples for each framework that you can steal for your own software ads.
  • Why listing your product’s features is the fastest way to burn your marketing budget.

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Nobody Cares About Your Features. Here's How to Write Ad Copy That Sells.

Let me guess: your ad copy is a bulleted list of your software’s features.

You’re proud of them. You spent months coding them, debating them in sprint meetings, and perfecting them.

And nobody gives a damn.

Your customers don't buy "AI-powered synergy" or "multi-threaded architecture." They buy solutions to their problems. They buy faster workflows. They buy looking good in front of their boss. They buy an escape from their current, spreadsheet-hell reality.

If your ads are just a feature list, you’re not selling, you're just describing. It’s time to stop describing and start persuading. These aren't "tips." These are frameworks that separate amateurs from pros.

Framework 1: PASA (Problem - Agitate - Solve)

This isn't about gently pointing out a problem. It’s about finding their most annoying pain point and pressing down on it until they’re begging you for a solution.

Problem: State the pain they feel every day.

Agitate: Twist the knife. Remind them of the consequences—the wasted time, the stress, the professional embarrassment.

Solve: Introduce your software as the specific antidote to that pain.

Example for a Project Management tool:

Problem: "Still running your projects on a chaotic spreadsheet?"

Agitate: "Enjoying those late nights, missed deadlines, and passive-aggressive 'just checking in' emails from the client?"

Solve: "Our software turns that chaos into clarity. One dashboard, zero confusion."

Action: "Start your first calm project in 5 minutes. Free Trial."

Framework 2: BAB (Before - After - Bridge)

This is pure transformation. You show them the hell they're living in now, then sell them a ticket to heaven. Your product is the only way to get there.

Before: Paint a vivid, painful picture of their current world. Don't hold back.

After: Describe the dream. How does life look and feel once their problem is solved by you?

Bridge: Position your software as the simple, obvious bridge from their 'Before' to your 'After'.

Example for a Freelancer Invoicing tool:

Before: "You're drowning in overdue invoices and chasing clients for money. You started a business to be free, not to be a part-time debt collector."

After: "Imagine getting paid on time, every time. Automated reminders do the chasing for you. You check your bank account and the money is just... there."

Bridge: "[Software Name] is the bridge. Connect your accounts once and go from chasing payments to predictable profit."

Framework 3: FBA (Feature - Benefit)

I call this the "So What?" Framework. For every feature you list, you have to answer the customer's silent question: "So what?"

Your "one-click export" feature is meaningless. The fact that it saves them 30 minutes of tedious work every Friday afternoon? That’s the money shot.

Feature: Name the specific tool.

Benefit: Explain what it actually does for them. What does it give them back? Time? Sanity? Money?

Example for a Video Editing tool:

Feature: "Our software has AI-powered scene detection."

Benefit (The "So What?"): "So you can stop wasting hours manually chopping up footage and spend that time actually being creative."

Action: "Render your first video free. Feel the speed."

Framework 4: AIDA (Attention - Interest - Desire - Action)

This is the classic formula for a reason. It’s a roadmap for seduction. You don’t just ask for the sale; you create an emotional journey that makes the sale inevitable.

Attention: Grab them by the throat with a bold question or statement.

Interest: Give them a fascinating fact or hint at a better way.

Desire: Paint a vivid picture of the future they want. This is where you pour gasoline on the fire with testimonials and case studies.

Action: Tell them exactly what to do next.

Example for Cybersecurity software:

Attention: "A single data breach will cost you more than a lifetime subscription to this software."

Interest: "We block threats your current system doesn't even see coming."

Desire: "Imagine the trust you build with customers. The peace of mind knowing one bad click won't sink your entire company."

Action: "Get a free security audit and see exactly where you're vulnerable."


Think this is just theory?

We used these exact frameworks to take a client's ads from 'meh' to massive ROAS. No magic, just solid copy that focused on the customer's world, not the client's code.

Stop Staring at the Blank Page.

Stop listing features. Stop using corporate jargon. Pick one of these frameworks and write an ad. Right now.

It might not be perfect, but it will be a thousand times better than what you had before. It will focus on the customer, not on your code.

And that’s the whole game.

If you’re still stuck, or you want a pro to build a high-converting ad campaign for you, that's what I'm here for.

Book a free, no-fluff consultation at holschuh.co.uk. We'll tear down your current ads and build a strategy that sells.

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